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Sunday, May 15, 2011

This Kind Love Letter

Have you ever read "Letter Written In 2070"?
If not, i really recommende this to you :))
This kind a short story which is best seller in New York
But it in the form of letter..

Which is wrote like this ::

This is the year 2070

I have just turned 50, but I my appearance is of
Somebody of 85.

I suffer from serious kidney problems,
because I do not drink enough water.
I'm afraid I do not have much time left to live.
I am one of the oldest people in this society.

I remember when I was a child of 5.
Everything was very different then.
There were lots of trees in the parks, houses with beautiful
Gardens and I could enjoy having a shower for half an hour.
Nowadays we use towels with mineral oil to clean our skin.

Before, women had beautiful hair.
Now, we have to shave our heads to keep them clean without
The use of water. Then, my father washed his car with
Water coming out of a hosepipe.
Now, my son does not believe that water could be
Wasted that way.

I remember there were
SAVE WATER warnings on outside posters, radio and TV,
But nobody paid attention. We thought that water was to
Last forever.

Now, all the rivers, lakes, dams and underground water
Beds are either dry or contaminated.

Industry came virtually to a standstill and unemployment
Reached dramatic proportions.
Desalination plants are the main source of employment
And workers receive part of their salary in drinkable water.

Assaults at gun point on the streets for a jerry can of water
Are very common.

Food is 80% synthetic.

Before, the recommended quantity of water to drink
For an adult was 8 glasses a day. Nowadays, I am only
Allowed half a glass.

We now have to wear disposable clothing,
And this increases the amount of litter.

We are using now septic tanks,
Because the sewerage system does not work for
Lack of water.

The outside appearance of the population is horrible:
Wrinkled, emaciated bodies, due to dehydration, full of
Sores caused by ultra violet radiation, now stronger
Without the protective shield of the ozone layer.

Skin cancer, gastrointestinal infections and of the urinary tracts
Are the main causes of death?

Due to the excessive drying of the skin young
People of 20 look like 40.

Scientists investigate, but there's no solution to the problem.

Water cannot be produced; oxygen is also degraded due to the lack
Of trees and vegetation, and the intellectual capacity of the new
Generations are severely impaired.

The morphology of spermatozoa in many men has changed.

As a consequence, babies are born with deficiencies, mutations
And physical deformities.

Government makes us pay for the air we breathe,
137 m3 per day per adult person.

People who cannot pay are expelled from the "ventilated zones",
With huge mechanical lungs driven by solar power.
The air is not of good quality, but at least people can breathe.

The average life expectancy is 35 years.

In some countries, where there are still some green zones
Crossed by rivers, these are guarded by heavy armed soldiers.

Water became a very coveted treasure, more precious
Than gold and diamonds.

Where I live, there are no trees, because it seldom rains.
When it happens to register some precipitation, it is of
Acid rain.

The seasons have been severely affected by the atomic
Tests and by contamination from the 20th century
Polluting industries.

We were warned to look after the environment,
But nobody cared.

When my son asks me to talk about my youth,
I tell him about the green fields, the beauty of
The flowers, the rain, how pleasant was to swim
And fish in the rivers and dams, to drink all the
Water we could and how healthy people were.

He asks: Daddy! Why there is no water?

Then, I feel a lump in my throat!

I cannot help feeling guilty, because
I belong to the generation who contributed to the
Destruction of the environment or simply did not
Take into account all the warning signs.

Now our children
Pay a very high price!

I sincerely believe that within a short time life
On earth will not be possible, as the destruction
Of nature reached now an irreversible stage.

How I would like to go back and make mankind
Under stand… ...that we still had time to save our
Planet Earth.
This article published in the magazine "Cornices de los Tempos, in April 2002.


For me, this article is really touchy
I love this article and often to read this again and again.

This article is to reminds peoples to save our earth from global warming.

There's also the japanese drama based on this article titled "Long Love Letter"
I haven't watch this but i really want to watch this drama.. My friend taught me that this drama is really nice.

My friend ever wrote a story based on this article and that drama which is have same title as the drama, "Long Love Letter"
If you want to read her writing, you can read it HERE, the story is 8 part but it wrote use Indonesian
I almost cried when i read her writing.. I love the way she write, it feels really happen haha

(Lily)

Sunday, March 27, 2011

Unleash Your Imagination



Fanfiction?
Fanfiction is a short story made by sudden writer with famous character (from comic, anime or movie) which played there. Mentioned as fanfiction because it consist of two words: fan is someone who freak of something; fiction is an article which never happen—full of imagination. So, fanfiction is article which never happen and full of imagination written by someone who freak of something. So if you like writing and bored with your favorite comic, anime or movie which uncompatible with your desire, let’s make fanfiction! And share it at fanfiction.net to get praise or maybe flame from readers.

What is Fanfiction.net?
Fanfiction.net is a  site that full of fanfictions made by all writer from countries whole the world. If you like to write, sign up at fanfiction.net. Or if you just wanna read any fiction, visit fanfiction.net too without sign up—but it better if you have an account, so you can interacted  with your favorite writer. And don’t forget to choose the category, genre, rated, character and pairing for your desire fictions.

How to make an account?
First, log on at fanfiction.net nd find sign up, then click it and fill the blank as you want. After that sign in at your e-mail to confirm it.

How if i want be a writer and upload my story?
First, log in at fanfiction.net with your account and click Publish > Documet Manager (Upload) > Browse your file and give the label > Publish > New Story > Select/Change Your Category > Fill it as you want > Click to Continue > Continue > Fill the blank in Publish New Story’s Column > Click Publish New Story

What kind of site to share my fiction?
Not only at fanfiction.net you can publish your fictions, you can publsih it at many site, for example: facebook, blog, deviantart, livejournal, ameba, myspace, plurk, twitter, etc. Truly you can publish it anywhere but it better at fanfiction.net because it the special site for write and read fiction.

What the summary of this posting?
If you like writing or reading story, you must share it to get praise for your story. It is can make you to learn how to make nice fiction. Maybe you will be a famous novelist one day likes JK. Rowling, JRR Tolkien or Stephanie Meyer. So, Unleash Your Imagination!

(Ryu)