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Another one of my favorite songs is "The Gift of A Friend" by Demi Lovato. This is an old song on the album "Here We Go Again" (2009). But I fell in love with this song.
This song became the original soundtrack of "Tinker Bell and the Lost Treasure" as the lead single.
This song became the original soundtrack of "Tinker Bell and the Lost Treasure" as the lead single.
This song tells of a friend.
I ever thought that I was more calm without my friends, but after I heard this song, it has a point. It's easy to say "I DON'T NEED YOU" or "I DON'T NEED YOUR HELP" but when we really feel alone, deep in our innermost hearts we really needed a faithful friend.
And you will never be alone as long as you have friends.
I agree with the sound of the saying "friends where we reflect."
So learn from your friend. =)
I agree with the sound of the saying "friends where we reflect."
So learn from your friend. =)
Check the video and lyrics out
Sometimes you think you'll be fine by yourself
'Cause a dream is a wish that you make all alone
It's easy to feel like you don't need help
But it's harder to walk on your own
You'll change inside when you realize
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in the gift of a friend
The gift of a friend
Someone who knows when you're lost and you're scared
And they're through the highs and the lows
Someone you can count on, someone who cares
Beside you wherever you'll go
You'll change inside when you realize
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in the gift of a friend
And when your hope crashes down
Shattering to the ground you'll, you'll feel all alone
When you don't know which way to go
And there's no signs leading you home, you're not alone
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in
When you believe in, when you believe in the gift of a friend
'Cause a dream is a wish that you make all alone
It's easy to feel like you don't need help
But it's harder to walk on your own
You'll change inside when you realize
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in the gift of a friend
The gift of a friend
Someone who knows when you're lost and you're scared
And they're through the highs and the lows
Someone you can count on, someone who cares
Beside you wherever you'll go
You'll change inside when you realize
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in the gift of a friend
And when your hope crashes down
Shattering to the ground you'll, you'll feel all alone
When you don't know which way to go
And there's no signs leading you home, you're not alone
The world comes to life and everything's bright
From beginning to end when you have a friend by your side
That helps you to find the beauty you are
When you open your heart and believe in
When you believe in, when you believe in the gift of a friend
Never heard of Tinker Bell as a song title. So it's Demi Lovato's single? Nice writing Ema. Keep writing!
ReplyDelete:c: yeah that's demi lovato's single
ReplyDelete-the gift of a friend- is the tittle
Dear Emma,
ReplyDeleteA very nice piece of writing and a very lively song actually :) Now I will hum this track for at least a few hours, thank you very much :)
This is almost flawless piece of writing and since there are no actuall errors to draw your attention to I will just say "great job" keep it up :)
You may, however, think about adding some more sophisticated vocabulary next time. Instead of refering to the song simply as "a song" all the time why not to call it "a piece" for once? "But I fell in love with this song.The PIECE became the original soundtrack of "Tinker Bell and the Lost Treasure" as the lead single." Sounds a bit less repetitive, does it not?
You can also add some adjectives. How about
saying sth like this :"but when we really feel alone, deep in our innermost hearts we really needX a CLOSE/ FAITHFUL/ DEVOTED/ friend." ? It shows the importance of such a friend plus it makes your piece of writing even stronger and better :)
So think about increasing your vocab for the next time :)
Apart from this however, it is a great job :) Some small errors are actually negligible so we will not talk about them.
We are now polishing your skills and helping you improve your writing even better :) Work HARD :)
thank you very much Mr wojtas :h:
ReplyDeleteYour comments are very helpful:)
I'll try to fix it :m:
because I am still learning and I realize there are still many things that I don't know yet about how to write good and interesting
You are very welcome Emma. Just do your best and avoide repeating mistakes and you will become proficient in no time :)
ReplyDeleteRegards :)
okay thank you full :D
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