On December 11, 2010, I and my friends in Atma English Course (fifi, nindy, indie, lily ,and miss silvana) wrote some of our resolution for 2011 on a paper and fold it, then we put into a white bottle. Then on December 10, 2011 we opened our last resolution. Oh my god I can’t believe it, it almost a year! And I forget what I had written.
I wrote three resolutions on my paper.
1. I want to go to abroad, being a representative from my school for students exchange.
2. I want to have drivin licence if I’m seventeen.
3. I wish I can get first rank for my eleven class graduation.
Among those resolutions I only got one, that is the second resolutions. Yeah! Finally I have a driving licence. My father accompanied me when I had the tests for my first driving licence. It took a lot of my time because I need to queue for about three hours.
For the first resolution, I was fail in the representative selection because I didn’t prepare it yet and I had mathematics test on the same day. So I think everything was massed.
Then, for the third resolution I think I need to study hard more and more.. :D Now I realize what I should do since I’ll graduate from senior high school and now I lost the passion for the last resolution. I must prepare and fight for selection into college and ..... But I have not decide yet what major should I choose.
Anyone have any ideas?
Before 2012 new year, on December 10, 2011 we wrote our resolutions again on a paper and put into same bottle. I wrote six resolutions for 2012 and I hope it will come true in 2012.
HAPPY NEW YEAR :)
Hello Emma ;)
ReplyDeleteSome very nice resolutions You had and it is good to hear that You have managed to make one of them come true. As for the other two - don't worry, just aim to fulfill the six of the recent ones. I will cheer You on :)
As for the writing - it is very good. The only thing I would replace is the sentence "I was fail in the representative". It would sound much better (from the grammatical and lexical point of course :P ) if You wrote "I failed". If are really going for the word 'fail' it could perhaps be 'I was a fail' but I would stick to the first version.
Otherwise, very good :)
Regads
W
thank you Mr. W
ReplyDeleteyeah I do hope my this year resolutions success more than one :D
hohoo.. it's my fault by the way thanks a lot for the correction